This is a very slimmed down summary for my story. Ive got a long way to go and no doubt i will change things but at least you can have an idea.
It was into a world long scarred by the Sundering that a prince was born, though he knew it not.
When King Harrad Vhalor the Peaceful lay upon his...
Below is a separate piece of lore concerning the Void. im still working on it but do you think it is more interesting than just empty darkness? Or could it just be unnecessary clutter? I'd be interested in any feedback.
Now the Void was a cosmic force that lay deep in primordial slumber, silent...
Thanks for the feedback. I posted a small summary of names/characters above for a bit more clarification. Also I kinda like the ambiguity in terms of in-world religious groups might ask that very same question. "Are they two separate beings? or are they two different aspects of the same Divine...
Continuation...
The Age of Rebirth
After Arkalegon's defeat and the gods' departure, the people of Eleneth were left to rebuild and reshape the world according to their own destinies.
As the skies cleared and the sun shone once more, Eleneth began to heal. Arkalegon did indeed bring renewal...
In the beginning there was darkness… still and silent.
From that void, awareness stirred.
This was Atariel, the first to see… and the first to remember.
Her seeing unfolded creation.
The First World.
Darkness mingled with light.
Then the Creator, unseen and nameless, forged from this chaos...