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JBCrowson replied to the thread What Does Good Omniscient POV look like?.Malik, thank you for your passion and for taking the time to share it with us. MUCH appreciated. -
And if you don't understand these delineations--if you don't know that there are this many First Person voices and at least as many...
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JBCrowson replied to the thread Dense Prose or Rich Prose?.Footnotes? more like foothills, en route to climbing Everest! With that annoying habit hills have of making you think you've reached the...
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You know you have too much world building if the AI cant keep up.
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Friends and family seems like a natural starting place, but unless they are fantasy readers, they probably wont really be interested. I...
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Agents and publishers will probably tell you to revise your draft if you do that because they do not associate shifting POVs with a...
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JBCrowson replied to the thread Dense Prose or Rich Prose?.Been reading Steven Norrel and Mr. Strange. It reads, at sentence level, like a nineteenth century author such as Austen, with language...
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JBCrowson replied to the thread How do you create your World?.For me there has been a back and forth between story and world: I had an original idea for a story, which necessarily included some...
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JBCrowson replied to the thread hello- Teen beginner fantasy author here.Welcome, and well done ditching the AI. If you post things in the critique requests area, people will usually read and offer thoughts...
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I thought the same things others have mentioned. All we know is what is "normal". So if you're in a purely evil world, those who live...
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Yes, I did not say what I really wanted to say, cause the words were not there at the time. For a world to be totally evil, which is...
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The thing is, I am sure a lot of AI I would not really balk at, but the tools that do this stuff are trying to use their AI features as...
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I've never done any of the following with any of my stories, but here's where I think the line is. I think asking AI to explain a...
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JBCrowson replied to the thread Mixing first and third person?.I agree with those who've said it could work, depending on your skill as a writer. What I would add is that the more unusual your...
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I'd advise against that, because it risks becoming telling and not showing. If you want to write in the first person then the character...
