Recent content by Jesterofchaos

Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate you taking the time. The main reason for this post was to see I was on the right track when it came to introducing my antagonist. This is when Captain Archuleta first see's Dragoon. So there were a few things I did not include to keep the post short. He and...

I'm still working on my writing. I got a lot of feedback on how to improve my protagonist introduction now I am working on the introduction of my antagonist. In unison the soldiers in black armor stepped aside and formed an opening in the crowd. In the distance Captain Archuleta could see a...

I was trying to think of something that was so hyped up and turned out to be a big nothing. Then I wanted to see what would happen if it turned into something completely catastrophic. First thing that popped into my head was Y2K. Ever since I have started this I have been poking holes in it :)

I really enjoy being completely immersed in the world the story I’m reading is set in. But if there is to much world building and not enough character development then it is all for naught.

When I was coming up with my story I went with four major races. The Humans and Neanderthals live mostly in the 12 known kingdoms. The Skurloc live mostly in the Hinterland that makes up the majority of the continent. Many are hired as mercenaries and assassins by warring kingdoms. The Dorian...

I really like the backstory you have for the different races in your story. I find it very interesting that there are so many creative people that have there own take and how using similar concepts come up with something so different.

I am curious how many man like creatures people have in their current story. In my story I have Human, Neanderthal, Skurloc- Also known as beasts of war. Legend has it that they are descendants of fallen angels from Lucifer’s army. They have thick leathery skin, pointed ears, with large...

Thanks for the input. The timeline was just a portion of my world building but it really helped me get a feel for where this story idea would take me.

The world building for my story started in my head when I was walking my dogs through a green belt by my house. It all evolved from a single character and just took off. The current events take place in the future but the people on the surface live like they are in medieval Norway. Weapons and...

This is all new to me. I’m hoping that this will help with my writing down the road.

In a nutshell it is about a girl who has trained her entire life to become the new champion of Arcadia. To prove herself worthy Freya must face three dangerous individuals at the Redemption ceremony. Freya and her five banner men are given the task of protecting the future Queen as she tours the...

Hi all, I have been working on a fantasy story for the past four years. The first two were strictly world building. I have started a first draft and have written 32 chapters. It is titled the Sacred Playlist. I have never participated in a writing community with like minded people and looking...