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Is there anything that has stuck with you till this day while you write? For me, it's, "add as much detail as possible. Make the reader feel like they're in the story."
Here is my third version. Feedback would be appreciated.
Thanks to everyone!
From a slave, to a soldier, to a king…that is Fletcher Rush. For centuries, humans have been enslaved, and freedom was impossible. But something is only impossible because no one has done it yet. To Fletcher, it...
Thanks, everyone! I liked the second one, but felt like it was missing what the story was about, while the first one doesn't hit as hard as I want. It's just nice to hear what other people think.
I'm going back to the drawing board!
Hi everyone,
I'm the author of Conquest, and I would greatly appreciate some feedback on my book. What I'm working on now is my description. I'll paste two below, and if you could let me know what makes you want to read the book more, that would be great!
Thanks, Matt
description 1
Affer was...
My first, and biggest, tip is: make a world that is inspiring, not real. We all have seen Earth and the beauty that inhabits it. So, oftentimes, when people turn to fantasy, they expect something different. You still want to keep the reins on everything, and not create something that's so hard...
Create a story you want. Like anything in life, if you don't enjoy it, you won't want to do it, and you'll end up putting in less effort. When you think of a story, you don't need to plan out every detail, but having a clear start and end point helps keep you on track and also gives you...