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Naruzeldamaster reacted to Queshire's post in the thread Skipping (canon) Character Descriptions in fanfiction... with
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Less is more when it comes to character descriptions. Just give the readers enough to paint in the rest with their imagination. -
Naruzeldamaster posted the thread Skipping (canon) Character Descriptions in fanfiction... in Writing Discussions.So, I don't often partake in fanfiction. But when I do I write in a style that assumes that the reader at minimum knows what the (Canon)...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Pinocchio.For one, Pinocchio's whole thing is that his nose grows when he lies. If you don't include that then it's just a story about a puppet...
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Naruzeldamaster reacted to A. E. Lowan's post in the thread What Does Good Omniscient POV look like? with Like.
I tend to default to 3rd Limited, in part because messing around with the reader is one of my favorite things. All hail the Unreliable...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread What Does Good Omniscient POV look like?.I'm equating this to video games so bear with me a bit if you don't understand it exactly (It's fairly simple stuff related to the...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Does anyone here have ADHD or ADD, and does that make you more creative?.I don't know if my disability makes me more creative or such like this thread is asking. I absolutely am more imaginative than the rest...
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I've decided to go with Omniscient as Close Third feels a bit too restricted. That being said I'd like to see some examples of it being...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.Roger, I feel like Close third is too close so I might go omniscient but then I'll have to look up some good examples of that to get me...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.My writing style is somewhere in-between omniscient and "singular" POV. I generally try to keep the POV between the 'main' characters...
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Yes, this all makes sense. One reason I was a little unclear about this is that I've never written in omniscient POV, and I adhere to...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.Hmm, I could post the chapter once it's finished (It's a chapter with 4 of the main party involved in the story and there's a lot of POV...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.As I've said earlier in the thread, it's a little more controllable when it's only two/three main characters (Doesn't happen as...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.I tend to do this a lot more often than I should, I don't know why but I feel the need to explain a character's emotions or thoughts on...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.Head hopping is sometimes used as a derogatory way to define a writing style in which the Point of View is shifted (keyword too) often...
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To be clear, I am aware that in excess, any writing thing is terrible for a story. Particularly if it's used poorly. I see a lot of...