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OOsloTheHand replied to the thread please, please read and critique my creation story..I intentionally made it a relatively small number of gods; note that Chaos and the infinite void will come into play later on in the story.
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The opening lines are redundant - it’s a creation story - we know from nothing, things are going to be created. I think generally it’s a... -
OOsloTheHand posted the thread please, please read and critique my creation story. in World Building.First, there was nothing. Then there was everything. The first two gods were created. Chaos and Fate. They disagreed. They clashed...