Love the imagery with the ship coming through the mist. You're setting the stage, the sense of limited visibility making this an area ripe for pirates, and it also shows some character personality with his mocking response. Love it. I tend to focus more heavily on setting when there's a clear...
Thank you! I'm in the rough draft phase of my prequel book and have about 40K words thus far. I'm a mama, so finding writing time takes some discipline. I am a voracious reader though, so I'd be happy to offer feedback on anything you'd like! I can offer some ideas or be a sounding board for the...
Welcome! Excited to see how your work flourishes. I have been world building since my teens, and I have hundreds of pages of lore, myth, magic, species, etc. I've written 2 of the 6 books I've got plotted out for the series and am working on the third. I had so much backstory I decided to write...
Morning all. I'm introducing myself as per request and hoping to find fellow writers and lovers of magic. Awkwardly quiet and shy, so that's about the best I can do as far as starting a thread about myself... I'm currently working on my third novel. I haven't attempted publishing due to...