Yeah i realise that i was just describing my character slightly :) I think your chart thing is very good and your description of the Races also very good. Well done lol.
My character is a nord warrior/archer. He is more of a hired sword than anything honourable and he sided with the imperials in the civil war because he prefered their armour. He prefers to wear heavy armour and fights with a sword and shield. He likes to think of himself as a good man but has...
I dont know if you have tried reading books on writing Fiction. I have read a very good one that will help you on every area you are struggling with. It is called "Writing Fiction for Dummies". Do not be put off by the name its a very good learning tool and tells you everything you need to know...