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    You are not "The Editorial Team". You are *an* editorial team, not affiliated with Mythic...

    You are not "The Editorial Team". You are *an* editorial team, not affiliated with Mythic Scribes. You must make that clear. You must make it clear you are an outside visitor who is fishing for business. Failure to do that at once will result in a permanent ban.
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    Writing in different languages

    Why are you showing it? Are you looking for just a vague "I liked it, you can dance to it" reaction? Are you looking for detailed editorial comments? Are you showing it because the other person is kith or kin and they want to see what you've written? All this will affect not only what you show...
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    City details

    Prince of Spires has the right of it: much depends on the era. To which I would add much depends, too, on which peoples. Do you mean to have, say, carpentry be the same for humans, dwarves, elves, orcs? Or will trades vary (which of course means shops and buildings will vary). Now, cutting up...
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    Color Me Annoyed

    Sounds like graphics card, which is not great news, There was a cartoon, many and many a year ago, that has ever held true. When there's trouble First look up Then look down Then look in your wallet. [minor edit: I think the line was, Look at your shoes. I can still see the line-drawn...
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    Hello from newest of the newbies

    We welcome reality, fantasy, alternate reality, and alternate fantasy. And even alternate historical fantasy!
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    Overthinking Worldbuilding?

    It can be separate, but I would call it a hobby only if the person involved never actually wrote stories. Worldbuilding for a game, or simply as a pastime, is unrelated to the act of writing books (or short stories). If it is part of the writing process, then no. Or, at least insofar as the...
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    Tired of using the same word

    In this as with pretty much all other "what's another word for..." questions, I suggest temporarily stop looking. Instead, look at the phrases you have. Start with those four. For example, when you have "a land of magic" what are you trying to impart at that point in the story? Is it a land...
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    Your Most Hated Tropes

    I have a couple of Chosen One tropes that has never even made it to sketch stage. One is, Wrong Guy stumbles into a place or finds a thing that marks him as the Chosen One. He doesn't want it, but everyone around him keeps relying on him and then getting pissed when things don't work out. It's...
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    Color Me Annoyed

    Another vote for cables. Back in the CRT days I encountered this when people would shove those huge monitors as far back on their desktop as they could, pinching the cable against the wall. They were astounded when a cable jiggle and scooting the monitor forward fixed it. Ah, the 1980s....
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    Victorian England

    Which sort of life do you mean? Think how you might answer if a person asked you what life in America in the 2020s was like. Which part of America? Wealthy or poor? Urban or rural? Young or old? What about along the margins of society? You begin to see the scope of the question is too large to...
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    Four-letter words in literature...

    Depends on the genre (even just within fantasy), the author, and the reader. If the language is used in an erotic scene, the author must bring the characters to that point. This means they have used such language in other contexts. Otherwise it would be out of character, as it were. That in...
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    Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?

    I ought to have been more clear. Everything that is in the *finished* story should be there on purpose. Drafts are exempted.
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    Workflow to Find Non-AI Art

    I used to be able to add exclusion strings: -getty for example. Because Getty and other entities have tied up billions upon billions of images. Copyright law does not prevent them from doing this, but it sure screws up searches. I'm a historian, and I go looking for images of, say, Emperor...
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    Most recent books you bought.

    Two more books by Patrick Leigh Fermor, both about Greece. One, Roumeli is about northern Greece while Mani is down in the Peloponnese. Both are crammed full of vignettes and descriptions that, while not actual fantasy, are quite fantastical.
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    Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?

    I find it more useful for myself not to call it head hopping. The phrase is pejorative from the start. It's switching the point of view, and that can falter in more than one way. Most often givers of advice will talk about switching the POV too frequently (without being very clear about what...
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