Recent content by The_vault_keeper

Hi I am glad I found this place already got some good feedback

Yeah modern style

wow that sounds really cool

oh sorry my book is about a kid named storm who is abandoned to survive he travels through gang life piracy and the navy to try and deal with the sins of his path and yes the pirate crew he is a part of owns the cove my story is a story of trauma and how it is possible to heal from it wrapped in...

Hi i am the vault keeper and i am 17 and have been working on my book for almost 6 months now it is a pirate fantasy novel called storm's shadow i am really excited to be talking with other writers

i think putting your own experiences into a character that you have made is normal once I have not been through half what my characters have been through but i will still probably be judged

I struggle making the world feel alive around my actual characters i love my characters to death and i think i made them pretty 3d but a lot of times my world feels flat my first book I am writing is about a character who has been abused and has trauma and when he spirals the book narration...

Storm 50 percent chance Ashford would bully the dm until he succeeds Selene would succeed 70 percent of the time Hans would succeed most of the time echo would eat the dice for giggles

that is so cool i am new to writing so i had no clue i could do that

Hello I am The vault Keeper (pen name) and I heard about this forum and wanted to see if anyone was interested in looking over my pirate fantasy to be up front what i have now deals with a lot of sensitive issues if you are at all intrested iwould love feedback and i would tell you what the...