The absences

[GothAngel]

The absence
The absence is big in life you
Try and try
But you make it worse.
But slowly it heals.
Then I realized I had to be a change.
Not just for me but for my future
Daughter, to shower her with love
Of a mother, the love I wanted.
-GothAngle
(Original poem written by GothAngel)​

 

[pmmg]

I do think you capture the vibe. My brain wants more natural rhythm, but...I feel the sentiment.

Should probably be moved to showcase though.

 

[GothAngel]

I do think you capture the vibe. My brain wants more natural rhythm, but...I feel the sentiment.

Should probably be moved to showcase though.

Thank you so much for reading it. why move to showcase thought?

 

[pmmg]

The site design is critique requests is for stories looking for feedback, story showcase is just for stories meant to be read. Promotion is for something different.

 

[GothAngel]

The site design is critique requests is for stories looking for feedback, story showcase is just for stories meant to be read. Promotion is for something different.

Thank you so much

 

[xena]

The absence
The absence is big in life you
Try and try
But you make it worse.
But slowly it heals.
Then I realized I had to be a change.
Not just for me but for my future
Daughter, to shower her with love
Of a mother, the love I wanted.
-GothAngle
(Original poem written by GothAngel)

What a touching reflection on healing and breaking cycles

 

[GothAngel]

What a touching reflection on healing and breaking cycles

Thank you so much. and thanks for reading my poem